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3 Logos , What do you think

  • 16-10-2013 8:30pm
    #1
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 55 ✭✭


    Ok here some of my beginers in graphic design arts.
    Rate it :)
    5 acctualy not 3 :D
    USA-500-CLUBS.jpg
    negl.jpg
    sellabrate.jpg
    Crest.png
    banner.jpg


Comments

  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,487 ✭✭✭banquo


    First is a little awkward, the rest are great! Though the first and last have the clear stamp of the client on them :P

    But fair play. The middle three especially are clear and crisp. Well done.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,762 ✭✭✭peejay1986


    Of the five, the second and third would be the best in my opinion. Clean, simple and effective.

    The first just doesn't work at all and I'd see it as the weakest. Difficult to read and very awkward looking.
    The fourth feels like it's lacking something. Very sparse in the middle and just needs some refinement. The basics are there.
    The last feels very 'clip art'. It doesn't strike me as being by the same designer who created the second and third. However, this could be what the client was after and if so, disregard my comments.

    Overall, some nice work. Love seeing other's work so thanks for sharing :)


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,729 ✭✭✭fluke


    The last 3 are more striking than the last two.That being said the second is the cleanest. In the first the USA needs to be much clearer.

    Regarding # 3 - What's the stroke over the last e in sellbrate about?

    The fourth is probably my favourite - possibly alter the football so that it looks like it is from the same universe as the head. As it stands they don't look like they fully go together. Also as peejay said it's a bit sparse in the middle. Maybe tone the gradient down a bit.

    The fifth, I'd centre the button face, it's a little off.

    My 2 cents. Good stuff!


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,700 ✭✭✭tricky D


    1 is unclear.
    2 is good but I'd drop 'Limited'
    3 is good but change the accent to acute ie. pointing upwards left to right like é
    4 is good but possibly lose the gradient in the middle, enlarge the head and see if it is better without the football
    5 how will it work at small sizes where detail gets lost?


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,298 ✭✭✭off.the.walls


    1. Not too sure
    2. Use a different font otherwise its good.
    3. I like it nice and simple.
    4. Doesn't make me really think football
    5. Is good


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