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  • 09-02-2013 7:50pm
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    Registered Users Posts: 43


    Always seems to rain
    when the sun should be shining
    but without rain
    without life,
    and without the next sentence as much as I try,
    concentration is needed
    I'll be back in a while.....

    Half closed eyes portray an image of two clasped hands
    pulled apart by two empty minds.
    Accelerate up on to the sky
    and through space I will climb
    suspended with arms open wide,
    chained and withdrawn from the earth for a while.

    No gravity to pull me down

    I just still.

    Distorted from my changing age,
    past and future saddles
    my every page.

    A time warp explode
    and my humble abode draws life from this cup.

    The alarm there set chime and convince a wake up.

    Follow-Follow-sure follow the arrow
    cause you must get your sleep
    to help you see tomorrow.

    Lids open
    and awake for a while,
    reality as we know.

    Wrong side of bed,
    feeling narky
    cup of tea
    buttered bread
    work of an hour,
    Dread.

    Monday
    Friday
    Autumn
    Spring
    7 day week can't change a thing.

    My body gives way
    I'm again on the pile,
    Concentration is needed
    I'll be back in a while....


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  • Registered Users Posts: 635 ✭✭✭jonbravo


    I'm not going to comment on this, for it has no name ,but I like it.


  • Registered Users Posts: 43 crazyhorsecowle


    jonbravo wrote: »
    I'm not going to comment on this, for it has no name ,but I like it.

    Thank you, I wrote it a long time ago as a quick rant , sometimes just write and see where it goes, it went there!!!

    So I never put a tiltle at the time so decided as it was not to be then so shall it henceforth be,untiltled!!!

    Thanks for the comment I'm glad some good came of the madness.icon7.png


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