Translation Help

Beorn

A friend in Belgium, of all places, asked me to confirm this translation for a tattoo! This is the usual Google translation. Can someone please give me a correct version as this is going on someones arm forever!

MY FREEDOM AND THOUGHTS NOBODY CAN CONTROL.

MO SAOIRSE AGUS SMAOINTE NI FEIDIR DUINE A RIALU

Many thanks guys.

Gumbi

Google Translate is a heap of sh*t.

Níl smacht ag éinne ar mo shaoirse ná ar mo chuid smaointe

Wait for confirmation.

Beorn

That reads better alright. Can anyone confirm this please?

Thanks Gumbi

An gal gréine

Beorn wrote: »

That reads better alright. Can anyone confirm this please?

Thanks Gumbi

That's a very good translation.
Maybe Google Translate is good with other languages but it's not reliable with Irish.

mr chips

Nothing wrong with Gumbi's suggestion IMO - however I would respectfully suggest it could be slightly more concise and have a slightly better "rhythm" if re-arranged thus:

Níl mo shaoirse ná mo chuid smaointe faoi smacht ag éinne.

Gumbi

mr chips wrote: »

Nothing wrong with Gumbi's suggestion IMO - however I would respectfully suggest it could be slightly more concise and have a slightly better "rhythm" if re-arranged thus:

Níl mo shaoirse ná mo chuid smaointe faoi smacht ag éinne.

Better again.

Beorn

Thanks guys, I had all the words but a concise proper use is what I wanted.
Go raibh maith agaibh go léir.