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  • 07-11-2012 3:33pm
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    MiloDublin
    Registered Users Posts: 80 ✭✭


    What is the theme of this poem?
    What does the line 'I wind the wash of swish' mean?
    I've read it a few times but can't figure out meaning.

    Anybody have any insight or feeback? Thanks

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    In feathered wing of sun surprise

    Herein the watch of wait

    All told for now these words near fail

    I'm thrown in longed escape!

    Slipping on the slops of smile

    Warmed to all in wish

    Curling in my hearts desire

    I wind the wash of swish

    Cotton balls on hills of change

    Silky shores afar

    Cradled in a womb of bliss

    I am the angel star !

    Curtained from the burst of past

    Sealed from all in fear

    Huddled in a bubble told

    I still a fold in cheer.


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