Subh Milis Sample answer anyone? or correct mine

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HI does anyone have a subh milis answer that will cover all the themes in one.

Or any subh milis answer that would get me full marks.

Also a couple of q, does it have to be complicated irish?
What does the answer have to contain to get full marks?
Any info on poetry at all because my teacher is useless =(

would this answer do for fearg.


Rinne mé staidéar ar an dán “Subh Milis” le Seamus O’Neill. Tá fearg san dán seo
Dán maoitheamh é seo lán de chumha. Lá amháin, tháinig an file Seamus O’Neill abhaile agus chonaic sé ‘subh milís a bhrascrann an doras’ Gan dabt ar bith, bhí an file ar buile mar a duirt sé féin gur eirigh ‘corraí’ ann.

Bhí sé feargach mar bhi air an doras a ghlanadh. Ach riomh deireadh an dan d’imigh an corraí mar ‘smaoinigh se ar an la a bheadh an bhascrann glan agus an lamh beag ar iarraidh’ Beidh an paiste fásta anois agus imithe as an teach. Cinnte tá beagan den fhearg saol an seo.

Cakes.

Please search the forum before making new threads, this question had been asked before. Pretty sure it's in the Notes thread too.

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