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WARNING SOME BAD LANGUAGE IN THIS POEM.

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  • 25-04-2012 2:58am
    #1
    Registered Users Posts: 43


    A passage if it's mine so i'll take it,
    and i'll feel just however
    i will feel,
    and in this rant upon my right
    to **** it,
    So it is,So it is
    And So it is.

    I feel so i'll feel until i feel less,
    My heart is broken so i'm best off
    left alone,
    If i'm lonely means you've ****ed off
    Long forgotten,
    So it is,So it is
    And So it is.

    My knees are raw.....No lack of feeling,
    My elbows brittle and held close to my chest,
    My eyes are blind
    For in my anger
    I removed them,
    So it is,So it is
    And So it is.

    If i could hang up down upon this ground
    and levitate between
    this floor and ceiling,
    With my arm pulled from it,s socket
    And my neck just gently rocking
    means you could have saved me
    from this scene in which i'm dreaming.
    So it is,So it is
    And So it is.

    If you may excuse the phrase?
    "that we've seen much better days"
    And if much stronger then we may have forgotten.
    But you've gotta realize
    When you see
    These broken ties
    That talk is cheap
    as i hang here
    Feeling Rotten.
    So it is,So it is
    And So it is.


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  • Registered Users Posts: 274 ✭✭PurpleBee


    I like the refrain.


  • Registered Users Posts: 43 crazyhorsecowle


    Thank you,I had no idea what refrain meant so I looked it up,thank you for your comment.
    I didn't know that that is what I was doing ,just the way it wrote .
    Good to know ,cheers.


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