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I've got a blog. :)

  • 18-01-2012 03:37AM
    #1
    DaneScott
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 54 ✭✭


    Hey. How are ya?
    I've got a blog. I only recently took up on the idea. At the moment there's 8 or so poems there.
    I'd be very glad if you'd take the time to read it and give me any opinions. I've never put my stuff out past family and friends before this. Thought it'd be fun! :)

    Thank you!


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  • #2
    DaneScott
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 54 ✭✭DaneScott


    oh and it's eh www.acreativewritingblog.blogspot.com

    :)


  • #3
    Insect Overlord
    Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators, Society & Culture Moderators Posts: 31,034 Mod ✭✭✭✭Insect Overlord


    Post the poems on the forum here and I'll give you feedback. How's that for a deal?


  • #4
    pickarooney
    Moderators, Arts Moderators Posts: 36,097 Mod ✭✭✭✭pickarooney


    No blog pimping. Start a new thread if you want feedback on individual poems.


  • #5
    DaneScott
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 54 ✭✭DaneScott


    Hey didn't know this is an issue. Genuinely just looking for some feedback.

    How about this one?

    Abhorring The Line


    A straight line of blue smoke
    Works out the kinks. When watched,
    A single spiral breaks off.
    Becoming so familiar.
    Surviving no perception. No thought.

    Viewed head on, a veil evolves.
    Light in the breeze.
    Sharp and defined, on the right.
    The spectrum divined sees everything,
    From fungus, to silk in flight.

    Spilling up now, to a point
    Where distribution holds all attention.
    Turtlenecks creating life.

    One crest, abhorring the line,
    Dances. Owing to deception,
    All chance.
    Unaware of any dependence.
    The inevitability of in-existence.


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