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  • 06-12-2011 12:22pm
    #1
    Doomeus
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 39 ✭


    Wanted to put this up to gauge some reaction. Lyrics are unfinished and are mostly there to give and idea of what the melody will be. Any critique of any kind would be most appreciated.
    Cheers
    http://soundcloud.com/user9830292/new-project


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  • #2
    Fi H
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 584 ✭✭✭Fi H


    I really liked the melody, I think there needs to be more lyrics particularly at the beginning, i think the first break is a bit long. Overall I thought there was a hint of Temple of the Dog about it and definitely think its got potential :D Fair play!


  • #3
    JaneWillow
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 61 ✭✭JaneWillow


    I love the fingerpicking style. Don't like the first line starting with '**** you'. What tuning have you got on this song? I think there's a bit too much instrumental parts, defo could do with some more lyrics. I like the line 'i don't want to be in this hurricane'.

    It's a good song and I can't wait to see the actual result.


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