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looking to rephrase a phrase/sentence

  • 02-12-2011 06:12PM
    #1
    dinneenp
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 8,253 ✭✭✭


    Hi,

    I have a photography website. All my posts have a related musical title. It could be an album, song title, some lyrics, band/artist name etc as long as it links/relates to the photo.

    e.g.
    God Is In The House (a Nick Cave song) title for photo of Galway Cathedral
    Inner City Life (goldie song) for a photo of inner city in Limerick

    On my homepage I have a phrase/header:
    Patrick Dinneen photography; where every photo has a musical reference as its title
    And in my outlook signature I have
    htttp://www.photoblog.ie - my Photography website, where every photo has a related musical reference for its title.

    My questions:
    1. would you understand the phrase if i didn't give the explanation first?
    How could I phrase this better?
    Thanks in advance,
    pa.


Comments

  • #2
    pickarooney
    Moderators, Arts Moderators Posts: 36,202 Mod ✭✭✭✭pickarooney


    The semi-colon should be a hyphen/dash/colon, but apart from that it's clear what you mean.


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