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A Poem for my daughter

  • 03-11-2011 3:57am
    #1
    Max Carroll
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 13 ✭


    Hi guys!

    I have just written a poem for my daughter. This was an exercise for a creative writing course I am taking online. I know it is flawed, but am curious as to what you guys might think of it?


    M's poem

    Helpless and innocennt, your trust is complete,
    Unrequited expectation with genuine need.

    I am in awe of yout every emotional demand,
    Rely on me angel, give me your hand.

    Show faith, yet cry expectation,
    Your relentless hunger feeds an incomprehensible pain.

    The greatest love, fuels utter trepidation,
    Fear not angel, put your faith in me.



    Thanks :)

    Max


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