Feedback on New Song

F5MWG

Hey!!

Wrote a new song there, Feedback would be appreciated!

Cheers,

Thanks in advance!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DfLMGc8QrO0

jodyWayne

Hi,
I really enjoyed this song. It's as good as any I have ever heard.

Only thing, I kept waiting for the vocals to rise up to the next Octave,
but it never happened. It stayed mono all the way through.

That's minor though, and if I were a producer you would be on your way!

This is my first listen and first post here. You now have a new fan.

Take care

F5MWG

Hey Jody,

Thanks, really appreciate the feedback! :-)

I do agree, I tryed to raise the octave and also change the rhythm but neither suited the flow of the song unfortunately.

jodyWayne

Your welcome. The rhythm suits the song as a whole I think. Chnging the pitch of the vocals; for me, just happenes or dosen't. Just keep singing it. If it's supposed to happen, sooner or later, IT WILL!!! Hope you don't mind, but i'll be listening to this song on a regular basis.

Take care

hponboard

had a listen, a nice tune but i'd have to agree with Jody
try a bit of harmony in there. a harmonica melody might be nice (and not a blue harp) after say that i liked it

Witchy.ie

Nice song man. I liked and commented the video. As others have said the vocal could use some variation either a key change or just try to use different vocal inflections in the song, perhaps layering a second vocal ont the chorus or even part of it would be worth a try.

sensormatic

tbh one minute was enough it just got boring but keep the good work