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Short poem, feedback appreciated

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  • 24-03-2011 6:24pm
    #1
    Buddly
    Registered Users Posts: 104 ✭✭


    Hi all,

    Just looking for some feedback on a poem I had lying around for the last while. All comments greatly appreciated.


    A Transient State

    Toll plaza ahead, alternate route instead;
    of the road less travelled, too often not challenged.
    My head - my only hunting ground,
    my bed - for lying around.
    Once the blue moon is told,
    indifference
    takes hold.
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