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Script Advice

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  • 18-03-2011 1:59pm
    #1
    Cordo
    Registered Users Posts: 44 ✭


    Hi Guys,

    I have written a script for a cartoon. A short script just to give the feel for my idea. I have never written a script before and would love to get advice from someone with experience as to whether its any good or not. Does anyone know where I could send my script just to get a bit of feedback. Note: My cartoon script is more of an adult comedy, inspired by simpsons, family guy and adult swim humour.

    Any advice or thoughts are appreciated. Thanks in advance.


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    pickarooney
    Moderators, Arts Moderators Posts: 35,190 Mod ✭✭✭✭pickarooney


    Hi Cordo,

    There are a couple of professional scriptwriters posting on the forum (see one or two threads down). If you feel like posting it up in public, fire ahead.


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    Cordo
    Registered Users Posts: 44 ✭Cordo


    Is it possible to PM them with it? More of a case of just trying to get feedback more than anything? Or is there a rule that things like this are to be put up publicly in the forum?


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    pickarooney
    Moderators, Arts Moderators Posts: 35,190 Mod ✭✭✭✭pickarooney


    No rule and no requirement whatsoever. Some people are happy to get PMs, other not so, I guess it's a question of etiquette as to how you approach people.


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    Cordo
    Registered Users Posts: 44 ✭Cordo


    With that in mind so can I open this up to everyone.

    I have written my first cartoon script and would love some feedback on it. I have a slightly edgier sense of humour (based on Family Guy and Adult Swim) so I did not want to put it up publicly in case anyone might feel insulted. In saying that I wouldn’t consider it insulting but everyone is different. I would love some feedback on it and any thoughts from anyone so please let me know if you would be interested in looking at it and I will pm you with it. Cheers


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    pickarooney
    Moderators, Arts Moderators Posts: 35,190 Mod ✭✭✭✭pickarooney


    I'll take a look and give you my non-expert opinion if you like.


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    davyjose
    Closed Accounts Posts: 9,287 ✭✭✭davyjose


    Cordo wrote: »
    With that in mind so can I open this up to everyone.

    I have written my first cartoon script and would love some feedback on it. I have a slightly edgier sense of humour (based on Family Guy and Adult Swim) so I did not want to put it up publicly in case anyone might feel insulted. In saying that I wouldn’t consider it insulting but everyone is different. I would love some feedback on it and any thoughts from anyone so please let me know if you would be interested in looking at it and I will pm you with it. Cheers

    I'll be happy to read it Cordo. there's also Write Club, which pickarooney might give you access to?


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