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A Poem for Valentine's Day

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  • 14-02-2011 2:46pm
    #1
    Kerrywriterno1
    Closed Accounts Posts: 28 ✭


    Hi All,

    Firstly, I'd like to wish everyone here a happy Valentine's Day. Here's a poem I wrote back in 2003/4 and I thought it would be very fitting for today. It's titled, "Whispers" and I hope that you all like it. Please feel free to leave some feedback.

    As I closed my eyes last night,
    I heard your name being whispered in the wind.
    I could almost feel the soft touch
    Of your lips pressing against mine.
    I could feel your hair blowing in my face,
    Your finger slowly caressing my chest,
    It sends my heart pulsating so fast
    That I fear it will explode.
    And then you turn your cheek
    To my ear and whisper
    Those words that would melt
    The stoniest of hearts,
    You whisper, "I love you."
    As I awoke, it saddened me to realise
    that it was all but a dream.
    I was left with only to return
    To my lonesome slumber,
    And spend another night
    Just to dream of you once more.

    Aidan Lucid 2004-2011
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    #2
    grungepants
    Registered Users Posts: 318 ✭✭grungepants


    Jesus man i welled up wit tears....Thats really good and sad.I relate.Good work.


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    #3
    Kerrywriterno1
    Closed Accounts Posts: 28 ✭Kerrywriterno1


    Hi Grunge,

    Thanks for that. I appreciate your response. Sorry if I made you sad. When I wrote that poem, I was in a very lonely stage of my life. I was single and just longed to be with someone so I wrote my feelings down. Thankfully I'm with a very wonderful woman today and we're engaged. I'm truly blessed to have her.

    Thanks again for your feedback. It's much appreciated.

    Take care and have a nice day.

    Aidan


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