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Shall I compare thee...

07-12-2010 10:44AM

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FoxT

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not so good really, I deleted it.
Hmm

My 1st sonnet

rhymed & scanned really well

but the theme was a bit AH, to be fair.

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#2 08-12-2010 12:43AM

Insect Overlord

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Aw no, don't delete it!

I read it this afternoon and loved it. Couldn't give it proper critique at the time, unfortunately.

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#3 08-12-2010 09:14AM

pickarooney

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Put it back! (I've just read it with my super-rewind powers and thought it was lovely)

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#4 11-12-2010 05:42PM

Oryx

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Put it back, because now I feel left out.

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