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The ghost of Fionn MacCumhaill

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  • 30-11-2010 3:28pm
    #1
    Registered Users Posts: 23


    I

    In the half-light, he stands
    as farmers might; his
    weathered old hands resting
    on the loose stone wall.
    His frame is smaller than in myth.
    A head of white hair that sits
    languid atop once broad shoulders
    stares vacantly across the
    golden valley; drawn by the din
    of the distant drums.

    In these fields
    he fought and died
    for the fallen pride
    of Ulster, before creeds
    of division brought
    derision to the villages.
    Before the pillage of
    genocide painted as famine;
    His ancient ghost,
    (a slumped silhouette now
    barely visible beneath the boughs
    of the aged oak), was
    a curious child, fishing
    with Finnegas for the sacred salmon.

    I, too, was a child then
    New to every nuance when
    I saw him first. His
    wind-cracked skin, lips
    that craved a quenched thirst
    Spoke to me in fits
    and bursts in a language
    foreign to its own kin,
    of a lineage lost
    in a war amongst brethren.

    'All are equal on this earth
    who search not for difference
    to find cause. Let he who
    fears become isolate. He who
    segregates become desolate..'
    he paused and
    sobbed slow tears.

    II

    He steadied and, with summoned strength
    Proceeded to then speak at length
    In tones melodic, more at ease
    with me, he waxed now lyrically

    'I've slept for many centuries
    Beneath the city in the east
    To waken only when the pleas
    of Ireland in despair increased
    Only the horn, with three shrill blasts
    Was fit to wake me up at last
    The tears I shed I recognise
    As realer than this land my eyes
    perceive as that as long before
    When warriors from this island bore
    To Roisin promises of lore
    That in her need we would restore
    her to her former glory for
    her dignity and nothing more.

    ‘Though restless often were my dreams
    The tyrannies of kings and queens
    Could never kill the spirit gleaned
    That lingers still in hills and streams
    Much worse, and that which worries most
    Is that we’ve sold, from coast to coast
    Our sovereign gains to foreign banks
    And with beguiling ‘please’ and ‘thanks’
    The citizens in cities danced
    To worship gods of circumstance.

    'But when they bled our nation dry
    And left but never said goodbye
    We acted as scorned lovers shamed
    Who sought to squarely pass the blame
    We shunned accountability;
    A victim culture woe-is-me
    turned farcical plutocracy
    That never learned from history.’

    III

    Across the fields they marched;
    Victors enriched by the legacies
    of battle. With sashes draped
    across straight backs, bowler
    hatted Chaplins that cut a calm
    comedy from the chaos of self.

    ‘Man cannot rise
    against what he cannot see.’
    He fixed his eyes on me;
    a frail freckled child whose eyes,
    bluer than the midday skies,
    turned pale and grey before they cried
    ‘We were born under the same tree
    But those who live in chains cannot die free.’

    I, who knew no history
    had marvelled in the mastery
    of the piper's pride. The oranges;
    the purples. Every lodge a float
    in a sea of colour. Who sees
    now the deeper red
    in the promise of bloodshed
    Was wiser then; an ageless
    figment of a life ahead.

    From his face he wiped
    the well of all
    wisdom. His thumb
    scarred by the burst blister
    where the salmon burned.
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Comments

  • Moderators, Arts Moderators Posts: 35,190 Mod ✭✭✭✭pickarooney


    I missed this when you posted it. It's fantastic! I don't have much comment to make but it was a real pleasure to read.


  • Registered Users Posts: 23 SAMurphy


    Thanks for your kind words. It isn't in my nature to go fishing for compliments or asking people to read my work, but with this and 'After the Tiger' I figured I should put them out there considering the times that are in it. I appreciate folk taking the time to read them.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 223 ✭✭cobsie


    This is the best poem I've read on this forum. It reminds me of 'September 1913', for our own age. Very sophisticated and evocative and prescient. Well done, a pleasure to read.


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