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    #2
    kelle
    Closed Accounts Posts: 3,243 ✭✭✭kelle


    I really like it!

    I love your voice and the instumental.

    If there's one small criticism I could make, it's that the the second verse seems to be of the same tone as the chorus so it feels like a continuation of the chorus which makes it seem to go on forever. But, all the same, I find myself waiting for the chorus and then singing it alond.

    Good luck with your song!


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    crazy chester
    Registered Users Posts: 187 ✭✭crazy chester


    Thanks very much!

    Thats the problem i had, i have 6 verses in total telling the whole story but the song lasted over 5 minutes so in cutting the time back i had to sacrifice 2 verses.
    If i post the full song would you have a listen and give me an idea if either of the 2 verses i cut would suit better?

    And thanks again for your feedback, really appreciate it!:)


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    #4
    kelle
    Closed Accounts Posts: 3,243 ✭✭✭kelle


    I'll do that Chester.

    I only discovered this forum today, as somebody who really loves music I'm enjoying it


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    Tallon
    Closed Accounts Posts: 22,569 ✭✭✭✭Tallon


    I really enjoyed that.

    As kelle says, you have a great voice and the music was really nice


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    crazy chester
    Registered Users Posts: 187 ✭✭crazy chester


    Again thanks for the positive reply!

    I had a look at your request for a song there Tallon and ill have a go over the weekend for ye!

    Kelle, Ill post the "extended":D version when i get home this evening

    Crazy chester


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    Tallon
    Closed Accounts Posts: 22,569 ✭✭✭✭Tallon


    crazy chester wrote: »
    I had a look at your request for a song there Tallon and ill have a go over the weekend for ye!

    haha, that would be brilliant

    Thanks


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    crazy chester
    Registered Users Posts: 187 ✭✭crazy chester


    Hi kelle but for some reason i cant upload the long version of the song. Il post lyrics instead to give you an idea?


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    kelle
    Closed Accounts Posts: 3,243 ✭✭✭kelle


    Are you able to send it by PM?

    Did you write it yourself?


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    #10
    CockleHocker
    Registered Users Posts: 17 ✭CockleHocker


    Hi Chester. I have to say right off, that I'm not a big fan of country at all, but I really enjoyed this. The lyrics really tugged on my heartstrings. The guitar work was great and you have a really nice voice.
    It's pretty damn catchy as well!
    Well done!


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    crazy chester
    Registered Users Posts: 187 ✭✭crazy chester


    PM sent

    Yes i wrote the song.

    Thanks again for taking the time to listen and comment.


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    #12
    kelle
    Closed Accounts Posts: 3,243 ✭✭✭kelle


    Hi, Chester

    I was listening to the song again, the third verse had me in tears! Now a lot of listeners love to have a verse that tugs at their heartstrings like that (my dear mother did, Lord rest her!), but I personally would prefer it replaced by the second verse you sent by PM

    (The men they say, soon this killing will end
    I pray to Good it will
    Then we will marry at the old church bell
    And build our house on the hill)


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    crazy chester
    Registered Users Posts: 187 ✭✭crazy chester


    Thank you so much for your input! I will change the verses around. Cant believe I nearly had you in tears! Dont mean to sound funny but im kinda happy i can evoke those emotions through my song!

    Once again thanks for all the positive feedback!"


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    #14
    crazy chester
    Registered Users Posts: 187 ✭✭crazy chester


    Ok folks ive posted a few more tracks and also looking for some feedback on these.

    **Please note these were recorded last year as a rough reminder so i wouldnt forget the melody, structure etc..:rolleyes: and they are first takes so the vocals and guitar work are very VERY ropey!:D**

    Any feedback welcome! Thanks!

    http://soundcloud.com/crazy-chester/shine-on

    http://soundcloud.com/crazy-chester/its-too-late

    http://soundcloud.com/crazy-chester/midnight-legend


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