Hypnotise

MrStuffins

So we went and threw some recordings together! And we have a brand new tune "Hypnotise"

We're not trying to sell ya a download, we just want some genuine feedback, because so far it's been just our friends giving us feedback and they HAVE to be nice to us :pac:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mf9T9sbAWNQ

anyjoesoap1

I like it. (Vocals need to raised a bit though) Very Good.

DrumSteve

Its good... as above the vocals need to be raised. The drums need to be mixed better but the guitar sounds good.

MrStuffins

Thanks for the feedback lads. Just what we're looking for!

The first draft actually had the vocals too loud, so maybe when they were lowered we didn't notice they were TOO low :pac:

DrumSteve

have you got any other stuff up?

MrStuffins

DrumSteve wrote: »

have you got any other stuff up?

Yeah mate!

We have 4 songs recorded. They're all up (and downloadable) at our MySpace, SoundCloud or Breaking Tunes (We also have Twitter and Facebook if you're interested haha)

Let us know what ya think

DrumSteve

MrStuffins wrote: »

Yeah mate!

We have 4 songs recorded. They're all up (and downloadable) at our MySpace, SoundCloud or Breaking Tunes (We also have Twitter and Facebook if you're interested haha)

Let us know what ya think

I'll check when i get a chance later :-)

Zombienosh

its good, i was however hoping this would be a biggie cover.

MrStuffins

AlcoholicA wrote: »

its good, i was however hoping this would be a biggie cover.

We considered that, but we don't wanna get into a whole "West Coast - East Coast" thing............. there are some bands in Galway who mean business!

MrStuffins

No Biggie covers included, but our full demo is available to download from here if anyone wishes to do so

fobster

The track never really delivers for me, the same build-up/break is repeated twice and then that's it, end of the song. It leaves me hanging. Well played, but there's just something lacking. The drums could be a bit louder and imo a bit more imagination on them as well, just a bit too plain.

Keep at it though, take the song and build on it, treat it like a base and bring more ideas into it all.

MrStuffins

fobster wrote: »

The track never really delivers for me, the same build-up/break is repeated twice and then that's it, end of the song. It leaves me hanging. Well played, but there's just something lacking. The drums could be a bit louder and imo a bit more imagination on them as well, just a bit too plain.

Keep at it though, take the song and build on it, treat it like a base and bring more ideas into it all.

Yeah man, you're definately right there. It's only a brand new track so we're still working on it (will be when we're all back together) but it's definately something we're going to expand. needs a proper structure.

Cheers again