Maynooth Next Top Model video feedback

ciencin · 2010-01-23 15:31:16

Just wanted to get some feedback on a short edit This was meant to be an intro to MNTM video but from some of the comments I got back aparently the tone of the video is too slow for an intro, so I decided to redo the intro and have this as a "preview" of the show... All feedback welcome :) (I like negative feedback too,…

23-01-2010 03:31PM

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ciencin

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Just wanted to get some feedback on a short edit

This was meant to be an intro to MNTM video but from some of the comments I got back aparently the tone of the video is too slow for an intro, so I decided to redo the intro and have this as a "preview" of the show...

All feedback welcome (I like negative feedback too, like on what doesnt work and what needs to be improved.. )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7LfUKgCxcZA

(editing/filming by me..)

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#2 24-01-2010 09:14PM

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Looks great, Mantra is a nice setting for shooting it.

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#3 26-01-2010 07:26PM

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It's cut together nice. I think it could still be considered a bit slow, tone-wise as you said. I think the music has a lot to do with that, maybe it could've been something more lively. Overall, it looks good, the shots fit that reality/documentary style.

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