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a scribbling

  • 20-01-2010 10:29pm
    #1
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    I didnt try to write a poem. its just something that came into my head when i listened to this;

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RBHcmUlm4LY&feature=related



    When I close my eyes,
    I see meadows of grass, I see the expanse of blue sky
    Spreading outwards and into the distance
    I see the paths twisting and turning
    I see the trees, their branches waving slowly
    Ushering me on. I feel the breeze they feel
    I hear their voices telling me I should go
    To follow where the wind goes and the paths lead
    To a life more lived and a healthier soul.
    I want to get on my bike and push
    Away from taxation, chain and mental woe
    I want to go where the waves grow tall
    And blue meets blue.
    I want to feel the joy of the road, the way of the world
    I want to see the valleys from the hills
    I want to tell of the world I saw
    the tales anew., and people I knew.
    I want to lay on the final field, and look back on the way I grew.

    At about seven, the electronic bells thwart my haven
    Awaken and bound to society’s will
    The ties are heavy and secretive.
    My life’s contract to be served to the end
    White masses of paper and ink
    All through the day, all energy spent.
    My hands are tied, in bill and habit,
    Now the ceilings are grey, bulbs in lines across it
    I feel the breeze of the mechanical fan,
    It tells me to stay.

    When I close my eyes
    I see the shadows on the road, the expanse of forest
    I see the suns shards pierce the canopy
    I hear the birds calling, telling me to go
    I hear the branches sway
    I feel the free air. I feel my soul.


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