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1 page comic script - Fail wife and Genius Husband

  • 10-12-2009 06:31PM
    #1
    Memnoch
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 4,276 ✭✭✭


    Hey guys, would love some feedback, it's a pretty basic script. Btw, if any artist is interested in drawing this for the craic, please send me a pm.

    Fail wife and genius husband – Go to the cinema.

    By,

    Vineet Bhalla. © all rights reserved.

    PAGE 1(8 PANELS)

    1. Ext. Day, FAIL WIFE, a beautiful woman, mid-twenties, wearing a jeans and T-shirt, steps out of a cinema and onto the pavement alongside GENIUS HUSBAND, typical late twenties male, abdomen slightly protruding, hair slightly receding. He sports a t-shirt featuring a starship. Behind them, a large poster of a HOT VAMPIRE GUY adorns the front of the cinema. Genius husband's got a frustrated expression.

    GENIUS HUSBAND: I can't believe this, what is wrong with people!

    2. Fail wife and genius husband stroll along the sidewalk, past shops. She's used to his rants, and her expression is one of indifferent tolerance.

    GENIUS HUSBAND: Seriously, WTF. How can ANYONE like that movie? 300 million dollars! Are you kidding me?

    3. Genius husband gesticulating wildly. A preacher in full flow.

    GENIUS HUSBAND: Why have vampires at all? LOL, I mean, those pansy vampires give the whole freaking genre a bad name.--
    --You think Lestat would spend his nights agonizing over some bitch he dumped?

    4. Genius husband's left hand is tightened into a fist, banging side first into his right palm.

    GENIUS HUSBAND: Teenage girls are the bane of the universe. They're single handedly destroying the quality of western civilisation!

    SFX: THUMP!

    5.

    GENIUS HUSBAND: I could understand if MAYBE the acting was passable, or if there was some decent action, or the dialogue didn't sound like it was written by a...

    6. Genius husband stops in his tracks, looking into the window of a comic book store. Eyes gleaming, wide open.

    FAIL WIFE: New issue?

    7. Genius husband's hypnotic stare tells it all.

    FAIL WIFE: Which one?

    8. Genius husband's got the biggest stupid grin ever on his face, like a child who's just about to get his favorite candy.

    GENIUS HUSBAND: Lesbian Vampires vs Lesbian Werewolves.

    THE END.


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