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New poem

  • 04-11-2009 11:28am
    #1
    Samia
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1 ✭


    I haven't written anything in quite a few years and have a lot going on at the moment and was inspired to write this today. Would really love some feedback on it.


    For J

    The steel horse you ride in on is beneath you.
    Stallions, camels, bareback tame tigers.
    Something exotic should transport you.
    But you come, as everyone else, in a steel horse.
    And you deserve more.

    You belong to me.
    For vague, indefinite periods.
    You ride in and rescue me.
    Or capture me.
    I haven’t quite made my mind up.

    I picture you with wings.
    If anyone could soar it would be you.
    In your glory and your wisdom
    I see you glide
    above the Madrid skyline,
    passing your life, and mine in a way,
    with your adventure; leaving intrigue
    and regret in your wake.

    And you know he and I have a life.
    Settled, stable, comfortable.
    But ,
    I can’t seem to keep from waiting;
    Waiting for you and your steel horse
    .......................................take me away?


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