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Constructive Criticism on short story wanted!

Incarnadine · 2009-08-09 13:16:25

Yea i put up an old draft I just realised, I'll re post up the other version, after i have a read through first! thanks!

09-08-2009 1:16pm

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Incarnadine

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Yea i put up an old draft I just realised, I'll re post up the other version, after i have a read through first! thanks!

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#2 09-08-2009 2:32pm

pickarooney

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I only read the first couple of paragraphs but my initial reaction is that you really need to spell/grammar check this as there so many errors it's a little off-putting. And there's far too many uses of the word 'naked'.

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#3 09-08-2009 9:19pm

Halla Basin

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So far, I have serious doubts about your skill.

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