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  • 22-07-2009 01:52AM
    #1
    Driver 8
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    The last of my soul drifts through the penitent’s ball
    Gazing at the damned from the edge of the marbled hall
    Scent of sulphur wafts through the air
    Tinged and perfumed by feral despair

    “Sins of omission. Insincere contrition”

    Descending slowly those spiral steps
    To the ashen room where the furnace was kept
    Two sets of lips combined in one wretched voice
    Decomposing twins sewn together by choice

    “You deserve all you’ll get. You will join us yet”

    Some great blast roared, tossing all about
    Plumes of smokes like the Lord reaching to pull me out
    Heel thrust down on her skull, relinquishing with a moan
    Floating out to the wilderness, cold and alone

    Gradually, the fear abates. Given back control of my fate

    Ah, reading it back it all seems a little emo :P Opinions?


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  • #2
    Klingon Hamlet
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,756 ✭✭✭Klingon Hamlet


    It screams of religious oppression. Fairly abstract imagery but I like it!


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