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Jesus, the blessed stew

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  • 09-07-2009 8:00am
    #1
    brendansmith
    Registered Users Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭


    Jesus, you know youre my one and only
    I keep a picture of you in my purse
    Your my doctor, GP and nurse
    Youre my only friend when im feeling lonely, uhh yeah yeah yeah

    You are the one, the de-vine-ah christ-ah
    Youre the source of my powah
    Youre the source of my might-ah
    Youre the one who turns water to wine
    One fish into many and you turned my world upside down owwwn-ah, no no no no

    You took the virgin Mary and you put her in a tree
    For all of us to see
    What a place for her to be
    I wish it could be me, come on-ah!!

    You are the blessed Jew
    who make christianity new
    you are the blessed stew
    A holy holy brew of meat and veg and you! you you you you!!

    PEACE OUT TO ALL MY PEOPLES OF THE GOD!
    RIP MJ, He was the best, my respect.


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    #2
    igotone
    Closed Accounts Posts: 46 ✭igotone


    brendansmith wrote: »
    Jesus, you know youre my one and only
    I keep a picture of you in my purse
    Your my doctor, GP and nurse
    Youre my only friend when im feeling lonely, uhh yeah yeah yeah

    You are the one, the de-vine-ah christ-ah
    Youre the source of my powah
    Youre the source of my might-ah
    Youre the one who turns water to wine
    One fish into many and you turned my world upside down owwwn-ah, no no no no

    You took the virgin Mary and you put her in a tree
    For all of us to see
    What a place for her to be
    I wish it could be me, come on-ah!!

    You are the blessed Jew
    who make christianity new
    you are the blessed stew
    A holy holy brew of meat and veg and you! you you you you!!

    PEACE OUT TO ALL MY PEOPLES OF THE GOD!
    RIP MJ, He was the best, my respect.


    Its a good effort chap. I'm trying to imagine the mood and swing to it.

    A good song should take you on a journey - to somewhere new and beyond. I feel like the above could be pushed a little more - take it to a higher level. Just dream it and it will happen.

    Happens quiet easily for me as I have been writing for so long

    Keep at it, if you need any tips let me know - I'd be happy to share


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    Dave!
    Closed Accounts Posts: 27,857 ✭✭✭✭Dave!


    Beautiful


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    #4
    donkeypop
    Closed Accounts Posts: 49 ✭donkeypop


    brendansmith wrote: »
    Jesus, you know youre my one and only
    I keep a picture of you in my purse
    Your my doctor, GP and nurse
    Youre my only friend when im feeling lonely, uhh yeah yeah yeah

    You are the one, the de-vine-ah christ-ah
    Youre the source of my powah
    Youre the source of my might-ah
    Youre the one who turns water to wine
    One fish into many and you turned my world upside down owwwn-ah, no no no no

    You took the virgin Mary and you put her in a tree
    For all of us to see
    What a place for her to be
    I wish it could be me, come on-ah!!

    You are the blessed Jew
    who make christianity new
    you are the blessed stew
    A holy holy brew of meat and veg and you! you you you you!!

    PEACE OUT TO ALL MY PEOPLES OF THE GOD!
    RIP MJ, He was the best, my respect.

    Sweet Jesus.


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    #5
    brendansmith
    Registered Users Posts: 4,526 ✭✭✭brendansmith


    donkeypop wrote: »
    Sweet Jesus.

    Some real hot sh1t ay? You like it i take it?


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