Kids

joe_dunne

Kids



Having kids will focus the mind,
Can't get ****ed up all the time.
No longer the center of your own world.
That place belongs to you're boy or girl.

So if nine months after a little fumble.
the spending starts you mustn't grumble.
For you it is a life long toil.
If you dip your wick you must pay for the oil.

It's not all bad they do eventually leave,
although this may take a mighty heave.
Be sure to send on their years of clutter,
so you can get back to being a nutter.

Unless its too late and you've grown too old,
you can't do as you want just do as your told.
To be put in a home what a bitter pill.
You could always fly to Switzerland and hit them with the bill.

Any and all comments very welcome

Thanks

Insect Overlord

A bleak and cynical view of life, family and relationships.
It's refreshingly different anyway!

lmtduffy

The majority of it is quiet clichéd, try adding some colour from your own actual experiences, your own anecdotes.

The lien about Switzerland is good.
Id just say up the quality of the content everything else seems in good nick.