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Alright so.. A couple of songs I wrote..

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  • 30-03-2009 10:38pm
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    timeforheroes01
    Closed Accounts Posts: 23 ✭


    First!!

    A summer of anger is comin our way,
    where are the protaginists gone or they just fade away,

    Shot down, with greedy ambition
    and people are full of corrupt politicians and hey..
    Have we managed to toe the line,
    or have we just gone too far.. this time..

    and has the green eyed monster bitten us in the back,
    and left u dead on the floor of a railway runway track,
    and people care not what you do,
    can somebody please get this message through and hey..
    Have we gone to far this time,
    Will somebody please pass the picket line and hey..

    Have we managed to toe the line,
    or have we just gone too far.. this time..

    Second!!

    Pictures of my idols on my wall,
    Slowly over time begin to fall,
    I cant be bothered puttin' them up no more,
    My fallen heros on my bedroom floor

    And I cant believe its this time of year again,
    Skies are grey and winters comin' in,
    Albions forgotten shore, Arcadia does speak no more
    of fools of gold and cold black winters war,

    Now im Runnin' away, Im Runnin'
    Bohemia's stayin behind, but you're comin'
    Make me laugh hard, make me get caught, make me happy,
    You make me fight hard, make me stand tall and has he ever made you feel soo differant so you can finally see,
    everything thats wrong with you and me
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    IrishCian
    Closed Accounts Posts: 93 ✭✭IrishCian


    Im liking them...
    guessing you're a Libs fan? the reference to Arcadia, the timeforheroes name...the line with the rail road tracks made me instantly think of "an englishman in a base ball cap"....could be just me

    got any idea of music for them?


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    melahide
    Closed Accounts Posts: 18 ✭melahide


    Hi!

    I like the first one. Just by reading it a melody came into my head - do you already have music for it? If not, and if you don´t mind, I would be glad to work it out...


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    tbaymusicman
    Registered Users Posts: 1,029 ✭✭✭tbaymusicman


    there very angry:D


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    mediafreak
    Closed Accounts Posts: 25 ✭mediafreak


    this one's poetic; sooner or later a melody will find its way together with the words effortlessly :)


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    igotone
    Closed Accounts Posts: 46 ✭igotone


    They're good efforts but just a few things

    You'll need to come up with some actual names for them "First!!" and "Second!!" are a little weird for the names and it doesn't relate to the songs in any way.

    Second, Whats a "Protaginist"? Don't you mean Protagonist? :rolleyes: It may sound like I'm being picky but I'm doing you a favour as mistakes like that take away from the focus of the song.

    If you need any tips PM me and I'd be happy to give you some advice....(currently recording an album at the moment so may take a while to get back to you)

    Keep it up


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