I've finally inked and lettered a page....

ALANNOLAN

and its been months in the making! Not entirely the finished version....I will letter all pages together, but as tests go I'm happy....

Currently inking page 12 of 24...can this be considered the final straight??

I bloody hope so!

dmcloughney

looking good Alan, how are you planning to distribute it when finished??

ALANNOLAN

Cheers Dmc,

Well, with the spectre of redundancy looming large, I'm thinking strongly of investing a few quid and printing up a few copies. At least then I have something solid, to show the kids, you know. Might hawk a few around at conventions....not really considering it as an item for general release.

I've been drawing more as a hobby for years now, so maybe I'll spend a few months trying to make something more out of it.

alnolan

Looks good, pal!

ALANNOLAN

Cheers Al!

ALANNOLAN

Here's the final version of page 1. I've revised the font and worked to improve the quality of the balloons.

All 24 pages are completed now, so its time to put the cover art together and its off to print.

niall mc cann

ALANNOLAN wrote: »

Here's the final version of page 1. I've revised the font and worked to improve the quality of the balloons.

All 24 pages are completed now, so its time to put the cover art together and its off to print.

I like the changes you've made to the speech bubbles.

It makes the dialogue flow much more easily.

ALANNOLAN

Cheers Niall,

Hopefully the rest of the story works too, ran through a few drafts before calling it a day. Got to the stage where I knew the text back to front and couldn't tell good from bad....that'd be the beauty of having an editor I suppose!