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superflyninja

http://superflyninja.deviantart.com/art/Through-the-Slats-107076191


http://superflyninja.deviantart.com/art/Ballyroe-Kerry-107767660
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thanks!!!

(btw pic one was taken through the small gap between the boards in the fence at 150mm) it is blurry on purpose)

ThOnda

Sorry to type that, but the first one is a little too much out of focus for my taste. And the pole with signs is too hard, too harsh for such type of picture - it distrubs my feeling of the picture.
However the exposure is excellent and you have clean sensor, not like me :pac:

melekalikimaka

hummm they are ok, seems like a poor photoshop job, i've seen your other stuff, a much high standard of processing so i dont mind saying the processing is cack, why effect were ya going for?

superflyninja

ThOnda wrote: »

Sorry to type that, but the first one is a little too much out of focus for my taste. And the pole with signs is too hard, too harsh for such type of picture - it distrubs my feeling of the picture.
However the exposure is excellent and you have clean sensor, not like me :pac:

hahaha cheers!!! good to get the feedback.

superflyninja

melekalikimaka wrote: »

hummm they are ok, seems like a poor photoshop job, i've seen your other stuff, a much high standard of processing so i dont mind saying the processing is cack, why effect were ya going for?

believe it or there really isnt much processing.bit of curves to boost contrast etc nothing exotic!! they look heavily processed then?

melekalikimaka

superflyninja wrote: »

believe it or there really isnt much processing.bit of curves to boost contrast etc nothing exotic!! they look heavily processed then?

the first one does a good bit to me anyway... unnatural colours, maybe the oof is making it look moreso i dunno

AnCatDubh

I like the concept behind these. The out of focus of the first is a bit too much for my liking but i like the black banding (wooden posts?) with the colour inset - I think it provides for an interesting frame.

I prefer #2 although I think the sun is a little too strong and/or would be better just peeping out from behind the sign post. I like the plane trail in the sky. Nice capture.

superflyninja

AnCatDubh wrote: »

I like the concept behind these. The out of focus of the first is a bit too much for my liking but i like the black banding (wooden posts?) with the colour inset - I think it provides for an interesting frame.

I prefer #2 although I think the sun is a little too strong and/or would be better just peeping out from behind the sign post. I like the plane trail in the sky. Nice capture.

nope the black banding is actually a few millimetre gap between two planks in a fence out in my backgarden. I was unsure whether keeping the actual sunrise fairly blurred would work.but i guess now that for most people it doesnt.next time ill get it in full focus to to gauge how that looks.
I liked the intensity of the sun and the sharp edges of the sign against the hills......it was a spectacular evening

photosnap

hey man I meant to say this to you on D.A.

But you should join www.photographyireland.net

superflyninja

photosnap wrote: »

hey man I meant to say this to you on D.A.

But you should join www.photographyireland.net

cheers! I am a member of that site but I foudn the photogrpahers on there to be to be of too high a level. Most of them seem to be pros. I mainly use this site more.Ive got a dry run of photos lately,cant seem to pull out of the slump cap'n ;p

photosnap

but thats so incredibly not true. im on that site! and as bad as i am at photography there's plenty of people worse! it must be said.

seriously, just post more. be persistent. ill comment on everything. i rarely use this or D.A. cause everyone on it are just great once you stick around for a while and get involved. just give it a chance...

photosnap

And another thing....half the people that comment here are on PI too.

Even someone else who posted on this thread but i wont say who :P

and its not me :P

but yeah, list of people on this forum that are on it too

Fionn

the first is sort of abstract which is good my only complaint is the area thats completely burnt out with no detail !!

the second one is well exposed - pity you didn't get the sun behind the post as again its totally over exposed and detracts somewhat

overall good efforts tho!

superflyninja

photosnap wrote: »

but thats so incredibly not true. im on that site! and as bad as i am at photography there's plenty of people worse! it must be said.

seriously, just post more. be persistent. ill comment on everything. i rarely use this or D.A. cause everyone on it are just great once you stick around for a while and get involved. just give it a chance...

yeah i was on there for a while but I think the quality of what everyone else was posting was quite offputting to me....I may go back there again though once I get my mojo back

Morrisseeee

I can see what you were trying to do with the photos, especially the 1st.

superflyninja

Morrisseeee wrote: »

I can see what you were trying to do with the photos, especially the 1st.

wel lyou know what they say.its the thought that counts