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A couple of odd pics.. C&C welcome

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  • 29-12-2008 11:46pm
    #1
    tracert
    Registered Users Posts: 311 ✭✭


    I'd value some comments on these, please. Looking to improve at the moment! :)

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    2.
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    #2
    Pigwidgeon
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    i really like the first one, i think it's a great, however i think if you had gotten all of the girl in the shot it would really improve it.

    on the second one i probably would have cropped it a bit closer to the guys, as i find the pillars in the background quite distracting.

    i'm sure someone with better experience will be able to give you better advice than me though!


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    smelltheglove
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    I love the first one, seems to be very well thought out and I love the colour tone.

    Honestly the second one doent do much for me but I think it is due to the guys covering their faces, had their hands been to the side of their faces it would have worked out completely different. This way it just looks like it was snapped.


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    LeoB
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    Think the 1st is excellent. If all the girl was in and maybe a little higher viewpoint to show more reflection. But I like the feel of the image.

    Not a fan of No2


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    YourName
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    no.2, Kikenny Town???


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    #6
    AnCatDubh
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    i love #1 and dislike #2.

    #1 has great colour, lighting and mood. The crop is a little odd but I think somewhere between where its at now and the full head will probably work well. I don't think you have to include the entire head if you don't want to but it needs a little more of the head (i think). The reflection is great, the cup is great, the bokeh is great. Well done on it.

    #2 just appears a snap whereas #1 is a photograph (if ya get me drift!)

    love #1 - well done.


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