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Poem or song?

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  • 13-11-2008 8:33pm
    #1
    Focus6
    Closed Accounts Posts: 26 ✭


    Okay, so have written a poem/song...who knows what it is.
    Its about a girl I have a crush on, but who is goin out with someone else.
    Let me know what ye think.
    No title yet.


    Were you sent to Earth for a reason?
    'Cos I can't think of any.
    Like a sudden change in the season,
    You warm the Winter for many.

    When you speak everyone listens.
    Your laugh is pure infectious.
    Excited as your eyes glisten,
    Your beauty is totally shameless.

    You have a mind so special
    And I can't think of another.
    I'll wait but my chances are brutal,
    Imagine talking to your dad 'bout his daughter?

    What would our children be like?
    Sound like a gentle seabreeze whisper?
    And if some lightening strikes
    Would your love for the hero get weaker?


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    #2
    pajodublin
    Registered Users Posts: 994 ✭✭✭pajodublin


    You sound like a weirdo stalker to me :D:D
    Just kidding
    Right now it looks and feels like a Poem
    although it has some things in it that with a couple of additions could make a beautiful ballad on piano or acoustic guitar


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