ironically sick

busted flush

It was so fast and so unthoughtful.
Yet it killed her!
Her anger was a raging bull.
It killed her.
I think she is dead.
i think i killed her
Mouth to mouth maybe required, thats how it started.
Ironically sick.

enda1

busted flush wrote: »

It so fast and unthoughtful.
Yet it killed her!
Her anger was a raging bull.
It killed her.
I thing she is dead.
i thing i killed her
Mouth to mouth maybe required, thats how it started.
Ironically sick.

Are the spelling and gramatical mistakes deliberately ironic because you posted this in the "creative writing" forum?

busted flush

yep Enda.Everything is as it should be in the piece!

Matt Holck

lucky

cause posts are uneditable here after they cool

the unthoughtfull bit was the greatest insult

I can't believe idiots are allowed to be moderators

sitout

I actually enjoyed this piece i found it quirky,imaginative and puzzling. Exactly like something of this type should be! Bravo.

Matt Holck

the benefit about blocked editing is that the eletronic signature is easier to preserve