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Writing Exercise... You continue it!

  • 03-08-2008 11:56am
    #1
    Black Swan
    Moderators, Category Moderators, Science, Health & Environment Moderators, Society & Culture Moderators Posts: 47,539 CMod ✭✭✭✭


    A shot
    Across the brow
    Foretells
    The truth

    Second one...
    It does allow
    To pause
    Uncouth

    In words
    Of leaden sway
    A mind
    Revealed


    (OK writers... you continue it)


Comments

  • #2
    brianthebard
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16,165 ✭✭✭✭brianthebard


    (first attempt)


    all is stripped away
    and the core revealed.
    Its light shines
    into every corner
    shadows are
    extricated.


  • #3
    The Volt
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 7,957 ✭✭✭The Volt


    Hiding places
    are no more
    everything unvailed.
    those who wish
    to remain masked
    futile


  • #4
    randylonghorn
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 29,509 ✭✭✭✭randylonghorn


    Blue_Lagoon wrote: »
    A shot
    Across the brow
    Foretells
    The truth

    Second one...
    It does allow
    To pause
    Uncouth

    In words
    Of leaden sway
    A mind
    Revealed

    But words
    Are not the way,
    Nor mind
    Doth rule ...

    The sharp blade of the spirit
    Conquers all,
    Mends all.


  • #5
    Red Hand
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 4,986 ✭✭✭Red Hand


    Blue_Lagoon wrote: »
    A shot
    Across the brow
    Foretells
    The truth

    Second one...
    It does allow
    To pause
    Uncouth

    In words
    Of leaden sway
    A mind
    Revealed

    Fully sailed
    Through the spray
    Bides it's time
    Steeled

    Battened
    Not battered
    Hands all wait
    The Rise

    Until time
    Comes to Prime
    And return fire
    To take your Prize


  • #6
    rebeldiamond
    Closed Accounts Posts: 80 ✭✭rebeldiamond


    A shot
    Across the brow
    Foretells
    The truth

    Second one...
    It does allow
    To pause
    Uncouth

    In words
    Of leaden sway
    A mind
    Revealed
    Another day

    As we shine
    A light
    On truths untold
    Never spoken
    Until we're old

    Fear will rise
    From deep within
    Don't let it
    Ever take hold
    An unforgivable sin


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  • #7
    Matt Holck
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,706 ✭✭✭Matt Holck


    zig zag when the cougar closes in


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