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the day i feel in love

  • 17-07-2008 11:31pm
    #1
    Closed Accounts Posts: 722 ✭✭✭


    I was exhausted from work when i first saw you. You moved all hunched and tense. Nothing at all spectacular to be fair, one might even, not notice you. I did though. Two men accompanied you they were gruff and decidedly grim. You spoke and i instantly fell in love and am still to this day!


Comments

  • Closed Accounts Posts: 21,191 ✭✭✭✭Latchy


    Who is this mystery man ,were is he now ?


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 722 ✭✭✭busted flush


    latchyco wrote: »
    Who is this mystery man ,were is he now ?

    One is in jail. The other is looking for us!


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 21,191 ✭✭✭✭Latchy


    I thought you were a girl looking for some reaction and imput to your poetry .

    I'm still not sure :confused:


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 722 ✭✭✭busted flush


    latchyco wrote: »
    I thought you were a girl looking for some reaction and imput to your poetry .

    I'm still not sure :confused:

    Im a guy. Its not really a poem to be honest, just a few lines i thought id write when i was thinking about my girlfriend,and how we met. Sorry you are not convinced by it, maybe it only makes sense to me .Thanks for your view though.Maybe its not great but its true!
    Does anyone know how to delete a thread after they have submitted it by the way?
    thanks Busted Flush . :(


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 21,191 ✭✭✭✭Latchy


    It sounds like the first lines in a romance novel and not unconvincing at all .My quote was just a knee jerk reaction :)


    To delete you go back to were you started in creative writing and use the edit function although might be a time limit on deleating thread/posts


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