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Promo Shots C&C

  • 14-07-2008 11:15pm
    #1
    Moderators, Education Moderators, Music Moderators Posts: 10,686 Mod ✭✭✭✭


    Just two so far, a back burner project at the mo.

    2669536714_c1b4cf4808.jpg

    2668708639_f63819c46a.jpg


Comments

  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 3,878 ✭✭✭whyulittle


    Can't quite put my finger on it, but the guy looks a little different in the second one. :confused::p

    The crop is very tight on the RHS in the first one.


  • Moderators, Education Moderators, Music Moderators Posts: 10,686 Mod ✭✭✭✭melekalikimaka


    its the same guy in case your wondering :pac::D


  • Moderators, Category Moderators, Arts Moderators, Entertainment Moderators Posts: 9,047 CMod ✭✭✭✭CabanSail


    What is the brief for the shots?


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 7,067 ✭✭✭AnimalRights


    Heineken at a trillion billion to 1 guess?

    Photo #1 is best btw, bit tight on right as earlier person said.


  • Moderators, Education Moderators, Music Moderators Posts: 10,686 Mod ✭✭✭✭melekalikimaka


    heiniken and barrows


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,852 ✭✭✭Hugh_C


    Constructive or destructive criticism?

    :)

    The pp is uncomfortable to my eye, a bit like the velvia preset in Lightroom - too saturated and too dense in the gammas. The sky looks like a U2 video from the 80s. Also the girl's eyes are shut in both photos and the product is not prominent enough. If I was the client I'd have issues ...

    Sorry, but speaking as an ex-commercials person, I don't think they're working.


  • Moderators, Education Moderators, Music Moderators Posts: 10,686 Mod ✭✭✭✭melekalikimaka


    oh negative omments are the best kind hugh_c, info taken in , i have bout 600 shots i'm playing around with ideas so i took every possible type of shot i could imagine.

    oh incase anyone is wondering its preperation for ELECTRIC PICNIC not any other festival






    ;)


  • Moderators, Category Moderators, Arts Moderators, Entertainment Moderators Posts: 9,047 CMod ✭✭✭✭CabanSail


    The model having her eyes closed in both shots detracts from them.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 3,835 ✭✭✭unreggd


    Thought it was for Elecnic

    same as above about the crop of the 1st one, and the girls eyes bein closed


    I like the sky in the 1st one

    though it seems a little oversaturated

    Not mad abt the 2nd one really


  • Moderators, Technology & Internet Moderators, Regional South East Moderators Posts: 28,536 Mod ✭✭✭✭Cabaal


    model looks better without the black top, ala #1


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 60 ✭✭OctoberFall


    They both look far too processed to me, the colours are way off too.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 7,067 ✭✭✭AnimalRights


    Cabaal wrote: »
    model looks better without the any top, ala #1

    :D


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,567 ✭✭✭mloc


    I like the post pro, considering its commercial and most likely for poster/advertising use it kinda suits it.

    Prefer the 1st shot though (given that I've a fair idea what theses are for...) i'd take it with the barrow at an offset angle with the models legs out the front and perhaps either a Heineken T-Shirt on or the slab of cans on her lap. That will emphasise the barrow more and make the product a bit more obvious.


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