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Quietude - please review?

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  • 05-07-2008 5:53pm
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    guitarsongs
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    dusky
    descendants
    of quixotic
    mutineers

    perform
    practiced
    perfected
    polynesian dance

    erotic

    on soft
    Tahitian sand

    my hands
    drip with dregs
    of spilt exotic
    citrus

    sundried
    by lustrous lagoon
    insidious
    hynotic tune
    and rhythm
    consume

    dancers,
    semiclad,
    gyrate,

    waves lap...


    shrill
    shriek

    shatters
    mood of
    quietude

    Rude
    awakening

    Rainy
    Irish
    Monday...


    ~~~~~~~~~~~

    All comments welcomed. You can check out my other pieces at my Poetry Blog
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