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Aurora Corporalis - please review my poem

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  • 05-07-2008 5:50pm
    #1
    guitarsongs
    Closed Accounts Posts: 40 ✭


    bursts of
    flame's glory
    in moments
    before
    ember fades
    and dies



    exhausted;
    exothermic
    energy
    explodes -

    Magdala Red
    and
    Magnesium
    Orange -



    the colours
    of a soul

    ~~~~~~

    All comments welcomed. If you want to check out more, visit my Poetry Blog

    Thanx!

    PJ
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