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C&C - Another newbie attempt.

  • 23-06-2008 8:23pm
    #1
    NullZer0
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,629 ✭✭✭


    Heres one I took last night in Glasson. Just wondering if I could actually get away with it like this?

    I know its a dark pic but do you think its too dark?

    What are the + and what are the - ?
    Any feedback would be appreciated!

    2605425340_951b53393e.jpg

    Click for all sizes (FlickR)



    Cheers,


    iRock


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  • #2
    [Deleted User]
    Posts: 0 ✭ [Deleted User]


    There's far too much of the photo in darkness(to my eyes anyway) to get away with it.I would clone out the reed encroaching on the sky and more importantly brighten the photo up a lot.On the positive side the composition is very nice with the poles leading from the left to the centre of the photo.


  • #3
    AnCatDubh
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 6,393 ✭✭✭AnCatDubh


    Not sure about this but I'd err on the side of it not working - and unfortunately given its dark state it doesn't leave you much scope for brightening (if in RAW then maybe you'd get a little brightness back out of it). I think there probably was a deadly opportunity to pick up a silhouette if your vantage point could have been around further to the right of your image? In terms of overall composition i think it may have benefited from dropping the frame ever so slightly to include a little more ground. Just a few thoughts. Hope they help.

    Cheers.


  • #4
    dazftw
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 5,728 ✭✭✭dazftw


    The composition is nice its just a bit too dark.. do you mind if I play with it?

    2605425340_582eb636cc_o.jpg

    i like yours better now :pac:

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  • #5
    elven
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,966 ✭✭✭elven


    want to update the thread with a new version of the pic?


  • #6
    Hugh_C
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,852 ✭✭✭Hugh_C


    the stuff in Paris is nice.


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  • #7
    NullZer0
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,629 ✭✭✭NullZer0


    LOL - forgot that I had linked to flickr from here.

    I had removed from Flickr as I'm hoping to shoot it again thisevening (or at sometime this week)... whenever my work and studies permit!


  • #8
    NullZer0
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,629 ✭✭✭NullZer0


    Deleted User wrote: »
    There's far too much of the photo in darkness(to my eyes anyway) to get away with it.I would clone out the reed encroaching on the sky and more importantly brighten the photo up a lot.On the positive side the composition is very nice with the poles leading from the left to the centre of the photo.

    I appreciate the feedback... and more particularly how honest it is. Will take what you said into consideration while shooting it again.
    AnCatDubh wrote: »
    Not sure about this but I'd err on the side of it not working - and unfortunately given its dark state it doesn't leave you much scope for brightening (if in RAW then maybe you'd get a little brightness back out of it). I think there probably was a deadly opportunity to pick up a silhouette if your vantage point could have been around further to the right of your image? In terms of overall composition i think it may have benefited from dropping the frame ever so slightly to include a little more ground. Just a few thoughts. Hope they help.

    Cheers.

    Thanks for the advice AnCatDubh - Its in RAW but I think I'm better off trying to shoot this one again (its only down the road anyway!). I can see what you mean about including a little more ground.
    Hugh_C wrote: »
    the stuff in Paris is nice.

    Thanks! - I'd love to go back there very soon. Beautiful place.


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