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First Poem

  • 23-06-2008 11:49am
    #1
    StiffLitlemicky
    Closed Accounts Posts: 91 ✭✭


    Hi guy's

    This is the first poem i have written, so i thought i'd put it up on this forum and get some feedback, all comments welcome but please try and keep them possitive, it will help encourage me to write some more.



    My name is Mick, I like Dick
    My name is Rob, I love Nob
    My name is Billy, I lick Willies
    My name is Ray, I think i might be Gay.


Comments

  • #2
    redarmyblues
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 983 ✭✭✭redarmyblues


    Its a little one dimensional, perhaps you ought to develop your theme a bit more.


  • #3
    Intothesea
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 540 ✭✭✭Intothesea


    Nicely consistent rhyming structure there which
    bodes very well for your future work I think.


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