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Wedding C&C

  • 21-06-2008 3:18pm
    #1
    feileacan
    Closed Accounts Posts: 198 ✭✭


    I was standing behind the official wedding photographer and ran these off myself.

    Any C&C would help (but not the framing effect)

    2598030438_448c9e844c.jpg

    2597962490_714bbb47f7.jpg


Comments

  • #2
    DotOrg
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,557 ✭✭✭DotOrg


    first one doesn't work for me as she's obviously looking at the camera next to you, not yours, colour etc is good

    second one, doesn't look all that happy but really nicely exposed and composed


  • #3
    Borderfox
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 10,263 ✭✭✭✭Borderfox


    Nice shots, I like both but I would crop the second one differently placing her more towards the left of the frame.

    Well done


  • #4
    RoryW
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,048 ✭✭✭RoryW


    I'd crop the first to show the hands


  • #5
    City-Exile
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 2,547 ✭✭✭City-Exile


    The first one would definitely be better with the hands in it.

    The images are bright & crisp.
    Nice work.


  • #6
    AnimalRights
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    #2 is quite a good capture.


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  • #7
    kjt
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 3,057 ✭✭✭kjt


    AnimalRights wrote: »
    #2 is quite a good capture.

    I don't think the second shot has enough contrast with the stone in the back. The first shot would have been a lot better if she was looking at you.

    Got any more to post?


  • #8
    AnimalRights
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 7,067 ✭✭✭AnimalRights


    kjt wrote: »
    I don't think the second shot has enough contrast with the stone in the back.
    I meant the bride not the settings. :)


  • #9
    feileacan
    Closed Accounts Posts: 198 ✭✭feileacan


    Thanks for the critque, very helpful.

    For those that are interested

    http://www.flickr.com/photos/pamilne/sets/72157605730214588/


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