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CD Single C&C

Floyd Soul · 2008-05-18 11:15:44

Hi, this is a single design I've done for my bands forthcoming single. I'm by no means a professional and I'd appreciate if ye would show me whats good and bad about the design! Thanks.

18-05-2008 11:15am

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Floyd Soul

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Hi,

this is a single design I've done for my bands forthcoming single. I'm by no means a professional and I'd appreciate if ye would show me whats good and bad about the design!

Thanks.

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#2 18-05-2008 11:31am

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Personally the box around the title looks too straight and boring. Give it a bit of a tattered grunged up edge perhaps?

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#3 18-05-2008 1:13pm

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Yeah I agree, it looks very clean and measured. I think it'd look much better if it was rough looking. Not even so much grunge but imagine you made it in a hurry and things weren't even or measured.

I'm not a fan of the 'tan' colour either, looks a bit odd, especially on the border part (which I'd ditch as well). It is a nice photo though.

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#4 18-05-2008 2:21pm

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Thanks for the comments. I've changed it around and I think its starting to look better.

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#5 18-05-2008 3:50pm

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I'd still mess with the border. Maybe a torn look...

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#6 19-05-2008 7:10am

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Still looks very clean and polished to be honest. But better, I agree.

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