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  • 04-03-2008 7:25pm
    #1
    fallen-kiss
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16 ✭


    this is just a few lyrics from a song i wrote a few years ago.!. i just thought I'd stick them up here to see what you guys think... good or bad all comments are welcome i don't think I'm anything special just love to sing and write. :)
    I wasn’t scared of you,
    I was scared of me,
    What I’d do,
    What you’d see,
    Now I can’t hurt myself,
    I’m breaking free,
    Free from all the pain,
    Free from me.
    chorus:
    I’m ready to open up,
    I’m ready to share,
    I’m ready to open up,
    Are you ready to hear, ready to hear me?


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  • #2
    humberklog
    Moderators, Music Moderators Posts: 10,669 Mod ✭✭✭✭humberklog


    Good simpleness to it. A lot of I,you,me but the lay out of them looks and feels as though they're carefully placed rather than a lazy writing device. Any music for them? If you have an idea of where you want the tune to go and even if you can't play an insrument why not have a look at the airing room thread?


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