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Express Elevator

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  • 22-01-2008 5:18pm
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    This is science fiction, somewhat long and the absolute first thing I've put pen to paper on. The draft is still a little rough as I'm revising grammar in the first section.

    It's 16 pages and in PDF format:

    http://www.bhalash.com/files/docs/express_elevator.pdf

    To give some information on it's background, Express Elevator is part of a larger story that I've had in mind for a while. I decided to write this piece first as I feel it will stand on it's own nicely. There's more exposition than there probably will be in the final version, and less dialogue, which is my biggest nit-pick against it so far.

    All feedback is welcome, but this is still very much a draft. There are gaps, there are places I need to contact and places I need to expand!


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