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4am insomnia

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  • 03-01-2008 9:14pm
    #1
    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭


    I don't know how to say it
    The words never come out right
    I tremble in my silence
    Yet i dream of you at night

    I want to let the clouds form my words
    Write it in golden sand on a sunny day
    Like the people do in movies
    These words i cannot say

    I want to scream
    Shout
    Fall
    Breath
    Let it out somehow..
    These words that will not come.

    I guess I should say them
    Before its too late
    My lips must move
    Before a closing date

    So I shut the door
    And bang the knocker once, twice
    On my way out to say what I need
    Apathetic about a debt of price...

    "I'm leaving you"


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    #2
    maninamousesuit
    Registered Users Posts: 43 ✭maninamousesuit


    love this. I can feel the anger. you have a great talent. I know crap about poetry except the stuff i write but this has punch and drive. In fact i dont even think it needs the last line. The emotion is strong enough to justify the lines. It does not need the punchline...But that is what i would do if i was writing this. I am not you. If its right to you...then it is right.
    The maninamousesuit has spoken.:D


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