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is this... sleepy enough...?

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  • 15-12-2007 7:36am
    #1
    lillykay
    Registered Users Posts: 34 ✭


    falling asleep


    down below, by moonlight bay
    the ship of dreams is set to sail
    upon the turning of the tide
    we'll cross the ocean great and wide
    on velvet seas with silent songs
    i'll smoothly, softly sail along
    and listen to forgotten tunes
    beneath a timeless smiling moon

    how i return, i never know
    nor exactly where i go
    and yet each morn come break of day
    i'm in my bedroom wide awake...
    with silver slips of memories
    all thats left from ships of dreams

    ;)


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    #2
    Nanoose2
    Closed Accounts Posts: 13 ✭Nanoose2


    That certainly is a lovely poem – I didn’t feel
    sleepy after I read it - but only because I just got
    up and haven’t even had my breakfast yet.
    After reading the poem I did feel a bit hungry – maybe it
    was for breakfast or maybe it was for another poem. Cheers!


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    #3
    Latchy
    Closed Accounts Posts: 21,191 ✭✭✭✭Latchy


    I know it's creative writing but how about a little sleepy music to keep with the theme . http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrctNIWaN4Q


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    #4
    busted flush
    Closed Accounts Posts: 722 ✭✭✭busted flush


    the best way to sleep is to drop a few viocane, you will be out like trout!


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    buck65
    Closed Accounts Posts: 4,969 ✭✭✭buck65


    Good poem


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