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Ode to Olde

13 · 2007-12-05 06:07:00

i'm not even sure why i wrote the poem like this, it just seemed to come out that way! hope you like it Perception, my point of you. Reflection, dare i conceive? An opinion that shall stand truer, over deceptions, i hath believed? And so did you, Fortuna my dear.. who took my hand and walked me thru, this promised land…

05-12-2007 6:07am

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i'm not even sure why i wrote the poem like this, it just seemed to come out that way! hope you like it

Perception, my point of you.
Reflection, dare i conceive?
An opinion that shall stand truer,
over deceptions, i hath believed?
And so did you,
Fortuna my dear..
who took my hand and walked me thru,
this promised land
whilst bearing fruits
and who dint'd my desires revoked,
belated passions within that spoke,
of wishful thinking..
insatiable.
requited love?
Perhaps.
Yet i hath never understood,
why tis you left me here..
to fend these boundless fields
of wan'd dreams.
is this to say, that spring shall come..
and here fro halcyon days shall grow?
Or am i quietly bound to lead..
life without a cradling sun?
with gilded horns
embowed like the moon
and this ember that is my heart,
dwindling ever gently
like a feather in the breeze.

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