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  • 27-10-2007 11:02pm
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    Closed Accounts Posts: 3,762 ✭✭✭


    Anyone have a favorite poem?? Mine at the moment is MCMXIV by Phillip Larkin (thats only at the moment it usually September 1913 by Yeats)
    Its talking about the lines of people queuing to recruit after the deceleration of war by the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland on the German Empire in 1914. Commentary by me!

    Those long uneven lines
    Standing as patiently
    As if they were stretched outside
    The Oval or Villa Park,
    The crowns of hats, the sun
    On moustached archaic faces
    Grinning as if it were all
    An August Bank Holiday lark;

    This verse describes the emotion of the people queing up. It is unhealthily happy for volunteers going to war, and the normallity of the people is highlighted "Grinning as if it were all An August Bank Holiday lark".

    And the shut shops, the bleached
    Established names on the sunblinds,
    The farthings and sovereigns,
    And dark-clothed children at play
    Called after kings and queens,
    The tin advertisements
    For cocoa and twist, and the pubs
    Wide open all day--

    Same normality expressed as the previous verse. I think it sumerises British society well, and it portrays a clear image. I think it also is saying that this normal society is about to end because of the war.

    And the countryside not caring:
    The place names all hazed over
    With flowering grasses, and fields
    Shadowing Domesday lines
    Under wheat's restless silence;
    The differently-dressed servants
    With tiny rooms in huge houses,
    The dust behind limousines;

    How the war is not affecting some people. The contrast between the countryside and war is immense, and the poet shows hat they live together.

    Never such innocence,
    Never before or since,
    As changed itself to past
    Without a word--the men
    Leaving the gardens tidy,
    The thousands of marriages,
    Lasting a little while longer:
    Never such innocence again.


    Striking imagry of the toll of the war - "The thousands of marriages, Lasting a little while longer" Never such innocence again suggests that life will NEVER be the same again.

    I dont think i did justice to the poem! Any other suggestions or comments on this poem??
    Or any favorites yourselves???


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  • Registered Users Posts: 57 ✭✭Flattery


    somewhere i have never travelled, gladly beyond
    any experience, your eyes have their silence;
    in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me,
    or which i cannot touch because they are too near

    your slightest look easily will unclose me
    though i have closed myself as fingers,
    you open always petal by petal myself as Spring opens
    (touching skilfully, mysteriously) her first rose

    or if your wish be to close me, i and
    my life will shut very beautifully, suddenly,
    as when the heart of this flower imagines
    the snow carefully everywhere descending;

    nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals
    the power of your intense fragility: whose texture
    compels me with the colour of its countries,
    rendering death and forever with each breathing

    (i do not know what it is about you that closes
    and opens; only something in me understands
    the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses)
    nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands

    ee cummings


    Still knocks me on my ass every time.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 9,846 ✭✭✭Le Rack


    one of the many

    Poppies in July

    Little poppies, little hell flames,
    Do you do no harm?

    You flicker. I cannot touch you.
    I put my hands among the flames. Nothing burns.

    And it exhausts me to watch you
    Flickering like that, wrinkly and clear red, like the skin of a mouth.

    A mouth just bloodied.
    Little bloody skirts!

    There are fumes that I cannot touch.
    Where are your opiates, your nauseous capsules?

    If I could bleed, or sleep!
    If my mouth could marry a hurt like that!

    Or your liquors seep to me, in this glass capsule,
    Dulling and stilling.

    But colorless. Colorless.


    - Sylvia Plath


  • Posts: 0 [Deleted User]


    I never saw a man who looked
    With such a wistful eye
    Upon that little tent of blue
    Which prisoners call the sky,
    And at every drifting cloud that went
    With sails of silver by.

    ...

    Yet each man kills the thing he loves
    By each let this be heard,
    Some do it with a bitter look,
    Some with a flattering word,
    The coward does it with a kiss,
    The brave man with a sword!

    Ballad of Reading Gaol - Oscar Wilde.


  • Registered Users Posts: 3,006 ✭✭✭thebullkf


    In the Desert - Stephen Crane.

    In the desert
    I saw a creature, naked, bestial,
    Who, squatting upon the ground,
    Held his heart in his hands,
    And ate of it.
    I said, "Is it good, friend?"
    "It is bitter – bitter", he answered,
    "But I like it
    Because it is bitter,
    And because it is my heart."

    DULCE ET DECORUM EST..-WILFRED OWEN


    Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
    Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
    Till on the haunting flares(2) we turned our backs
    And towards our distant rest(3) began to trudge.
    Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots
    But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
    Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots(4)
    Of tired, outstripped(5) Five-Nines(6) that dropped behind.
    Gas!(7) Gas! Quick, boys! – An ecstasy of fumbling,
    Fitting the clumsy helmets(8) just in time;
    But someone still was yelling out and stumbling,
    And flound'ring like a man in fire or lime(9) . . .
    Dim, through the misty panes(10) and thick green light,
    As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.
    In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,
    He plunges at me, guttering,(11) choking, drowning.
    If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
    Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
    And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
    His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin;
    If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
    Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
    Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud(12)
    Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,
    My friend, you would not tell with such high zest(13)
    To children ardent(14) for some desperate glory,
    The old Lie; Dulce et Decorum est
    Pro patria mori.(15)


    Notes on Dulce et Decorum Est

    1. DULCE ET DECORUM EST - the first words of a Latin saying (taken from an ode by Horace). The words were widely understood and often quoted at the start of the First World War. They mean "It is sweet and right." The full saying ends the poem: Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori - it is sweet and right to die for your country. In other words, it is a wonderful and great honour to fight and die for your country.
    2. Flares - rockets which were sent up to burn with a brilliant glare to light up men and other targets in the area between the front lines (See illustration, page 118 of Out in the Dark.)
    3. Distant rest - a camp away from the front line where exhausted soldiers might rest for a few days, or longer
    4. Hoots - the noise made by the shells rushing through the air
    5. Outstripped - outpaced, the soldiers have struggled beyond the reach of these shells which are now falling behind them as they struggle away from the scene of battle
    6. Five-Nines - 5.9 calibre explosive shells
    7. Gas! - poison gas. From the symptoms it would appear to be chlorine or phosgene gas. The filling of the lungs with fluid had the same effects as when a person drowned
    8. Helmets - the early name for gas masks
    9. Lime - a white chalky substance which can burn live tissue
    10. Panes - the glass in the eyepieces of the gas masks
    11. Guttering - Owen probably meant flickering out like a candle or gurgling like water draining down a gutter, referring to the sounds in the throat of the choking man, or it might be a sound partly like stuttering and partly like gurgling
    12. Cud - normally the regurgitated grass that cows chew usually green and bubbling. Here a similar looking material was issuing from the soldier's mouth
    13. High zest - idealistic enthusiasm, keenly believing in the rightness of the idea
    14. ardent - keen
    15. Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori - see note 1 above.


  • Registered Users Posts: 21 bdeb


    Reflections
    Last night I watched a kittywake fly
    glide and fly
    the red sunset
    kissed
    the cold grey waters.
    Strayed my thoughts to a ferries departure
    a four tiered christening cake
    on the horizon.
    Shimmering lights
    slowly fading
    silently waving
    a lady crying
    her tears
    the waters flavour.
    Elaborate cycles of blackened mass.
    Red sky turned
    violet blue
    cold.
    Cold and sad yet happy
    reflections dance
    skimming the water peaks
    At me they point.
    Tonight I am the centre
    this reflective world
    How close, so far
    I kneel, I touch
    gone
    astir a million tiny ripples.
    The waves caress the granite pier
    no emotion, no sentiment
    just gentle lapping
    Gentle erosion the rock built pier
    Gentle erosion the time of man.
    Last night I watched a ferry depart.
    Last night I watched a seagull fly.
    Last night I thought,
    thought
    "sic transit gloria mundi"


    So passes the glory of the world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 15 bumm


    Ms Plath on the human condition - spellbindingly spellbinding

    November Graveyard Sylvia Plath

    The scene stands stubborn: skinflint trees
    Hoard last year's leaves, won't mourn, wear sackcloth, or turn
    To elegiac dryads, and dour grass
    Guards the hard-hearted emerald of its grassiness
    However the grandiloquent mind may scorn
    Such poverty. No dead men's cries

    Flower forget-me-nots between the stones
    Paving this grave ground. Here's honest rot
    To unpick the heart, pare bone
    Free of the fictive vein. When one stark skeleton
    Bulks real, all saint's tongues fall quiet:
    Flies watch no reserrections in the sun.

    At the essential landscape stare, stare
    Till your eyes foist a vision dazzling on the wind:
    Whatever lost ghosts flare
    Damned, howling in their shrouds across the moor
    Rave on the leash of the starving mind
    Which peoples the bare room, the blank, untenanted air.

    Actually i don't really have a clue what condition she is on
    about. Her mind was a strange place and a lot of her outlook
    upon life tended to be on the dark side. But I love her evocation
    of nature and her landscape descriptions to portray her
    view of life. It's very haunting listening to her read these
    poems on utube


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 175 ✭✭cucbuc


    You do not do, you do not do
    Any more, black shoe
    In which I have lived like a foot
    For thirty years, poor and white,
    Barely daring to breathe or Achoo.

    Daddy, I have had to kill you.
    You died before I had time--
    Marble-heavy, a bag full of God,
    Ghastly statue with one gray toe
    Big as a Frisco seal

    And a head in the freakish Atlantic
    Where it pours bean green over blue
    In the waters off beautiful Nauset.
    I used to pray to recover you.
    Ach, du.

    In the German tongue, in the Polish town
    Scraped flat by the roller
    Of wars, wars, wars.
    But the name of the town is common.
    My Polack friend

    Says there are a dozen or two.
    So I never could tell where you
    Put your foot, your root,
    I never could talk to you.
    The tongue stuck in my jaw.

    It stuck in a barb wire snare.
    Ich, ich, ich, ich,
    I could hardly speak.
    I thought every German was you.
    And the language obscene

    An engine, an engine
    Chuffing me off like a Jew.
    A Jew to Dachau, Auschwitz, Belsen.
    I began to talk like a Jew.
    I think I may well be a Jew.

    The snows of the Tyrol, the clear beer of Vienna
    Are not very pure or true.
    With my gipsy ancestress and my weird luck
    And my Taroc pack and my Taroc pack
    I may be a bit of a Jew.

    I have always been scared of you,
    With your Luftwaffe, your gobbledygoo.
    And your neat mustache
    And your Aryan eye, bright blue.
    Panzer-man, panzer-man, O You--

    Not God but a swastika
    So black no sky could squeak through.
    Every woman adores a Fascist,
    The boot in the face, the brute
    Brute heart of a brute like you.

    You stand at the blackboard, daddy,
    In the picture I have of you,
    A cleft in your chin instead of your foot
    But no less a devil for that, no not
    Any less the black man who

    Bit my pretty red heart in two.
    I was ten when they buried you.
    At twenty I tried to die
    And get back, back, back to you.
    I thought even the bones would do.

    But they pulled me out of the sack,
    And they stuck me together with glue.
    And then I knew what to do.
    I made a model of you,
    A man in black with a Meinkampf look

    And a love of the rack and the screw.
    And I said I do, I do.
    So daddy, I'm finally through.
    The black telephone's off at the root,
    The voices just can't worm through.

    If I've killed one man, I've killed two--
    The vampire who said he was you
    And drank my blood for a year,
    Seven years, if you want to know.
    Daddy, you can lie back now.

    There's a stake in your fat black heart
    And the villagers never liked you.
    They are dancing and stamping on you.
    They always knew it was you.
    Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I'm through.


  • Registered Users Posts: 673 ✭✭✭merlie


    Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening
    by Robert Frost

    Whose woods these are I think I know.
    His house is in the village though;
    He will not see me stopping here
    To watch his woods fill up with snow.

    My little horse must think it queer
    To stop without a farmhouse near
    Between the woods and frozen lake
    The darkest evening of the year.

    He gives his harness bells a shake
    To ask if there is some mistake.
    The only other sound's the sweep
    Of easy wind and downy flake.

    The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
    But I have promises to keep,
    And miles to go before I sleep,
    And miles to go before I sleep.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 590 ✭✭✭SparkyTech


    Go placidly amid the noise and haste and remember what peace there may be in silence. Go as far as possible without surrender be on good terms with all persons. Speak your truth quietly and clearly and listen to others, even the dull and ignorant, they have their stories too.

    Avoid loud and aggressive persons, they are vexations to the spirit. If you compare yourself with others, you may become vain and bitter, for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself. Enjoy your achievements as well as your plans.

    Keep interested in your own career, however humble, it is a real possession in the changing fortunes of time. Exercise caution in your business affairs, for the world is full of trickery. But let this not blind you to what virtue there is, many persons strive for high ideal, and everywhere life is full of heroism.

    Be yourself. Especially do not feign affection. Neither be cynical about love, for in the face of all aridity and disenchantment it is as perennial as the grass.

    Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the things of youth. Nurture strength of spirit to shield you in sudden misfortune. Beyond a wholesome discipline, be gentle with yourself.

    You are a child of the universe, no less than the trees or stars, you have a right to be here. And whether or not it is clear to you, no doubt the universe is unfolding as it should.

    Therefore be at peace with God, whatever you conceive him to be, and whatever your labours and aspirations, in the noisy confusion of life keep peace with your soul.

    With all its sham, drudgery and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world. Be careful. Strive to be happy.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 175 ✭✭cucbuc


    I've always loved those lines. At the risk of sounding corny, they really are inspirational.


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 4 Sway01


    As obviously corny as it might be, I have to go with Ozymandias. It probably has something to do with personal experiences that I underwent when first hearing it.

    Ozymandias

    I met a traveller from an antique land
    Who said: "Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
    Stand in the desert. Near them on the sand,
    Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown
    And wrinkled lip and sneer of cold command
    Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
    Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
    The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed.
    And on the pedestal these words appear:
    `My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
    Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!'
    Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
    Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare,
    The lone and level sands stretch far away".


    Shelley


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