MINI Clubman for your viewing pleasure/criticism

Owen

Took this photo at the recent Dealer launch in Berlin for the new MINI Clubman. I'm not sure about all the roof paraphenalia, the extra lights, trusses, etc, and was going to crop them out, but I'll leave that open to you guys. I had a terrible selection of lenses with me, and no tripod, and I'm nearly certain my camera is filthy. The irony of it all is that next to my Hotel was the local Canon service centre who'd have gladly cleaned my camera professionally if I'd known about them.

rymus

I'd leave the roof bits & bobs and the lights in.. Fits quite well. Maybe tone down or clone that light section in the top right corner out though, it's kinda distracting.

AnCatDubh

Just a suggestion but a 2/3 crop might work leaving in just above the main light source. Its the only one (i think) that is causing an impact on the light falling on the mini. One other suggestion is maybe to try it in square format. All that darkness towards the top is a bit like an abyss.

Borderfox

I like it (not the car the shot) my eye goes from the black to the light.