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The lake and Rose

  • 25-09-2007 7:45pm
    #1
    Xyo
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 455 ✭✭


    Sitting on my rock,
    Watching the lake.
    I can see the whole world from here.
    I can watch the sway of a beautiful rose
    and I can watch the life of each of my loved

    ones including my own personal rose.

    I see their tears at first filling up the

    lake. Sadness and rejoice, tears are all

    the same once they are shed.

    I see them all together laughing at times

    remembered and I laugh too.


    The tears stop sometime and the laughing

    stops also
    I see their lives continuing without me. I

    see them moving on forgetting the tears

    they've shed the laughs they've shared all

    in my name.

    As for my rose, she stays strong without me

    and she never forgets. She keeps my lake

    alive with tears so that I may watch the

    world I belonged too once.




    Would appreciate any comments


Comments

  • #2
    shiv
    Closed Accounts Posts: 408 ✭✭shiv


    I can't put my finger on what I like about this, but I do.
    There's an elegance in there somewhere.


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