Ode to a Lover

This is a really simple poem I wrote for my girlfriend, it's nothing special, so not expecting glowing reviews, but thought I'd see what people thought

I never imagined I could love anything
the way I love you now.
I never imagined I could be as happy
as happy when I am around you.
My darling girlfriend, my beautiful wife;
the one with whom I’ll spend my life.
You are everything to me;
my night and my day, my inspiration and my light.
My English Rose, my Irish Bell,
I could walk through Hell with you beside me.
My love grows stronger with each passing day,
my soul-mate who’ll never be too far away.
That’s what we are; you and I;
soul-mates ‘til we die.
I want to be with you, in the ever after
my love, my heart, my soul yours forever.
With this, I promise you,
my love will always be true.
With this, I share my love,
even when we are both above.

busted flush

quaint idea!
poor in parts
liked the jist of it though.

trilo

Ahh bless, you must really love your missus.

It's a bit overkill for my taste but it is good and i really enjoyed reading it.

I am not into poetry and writing and all that lot, so my comment is purely personal opinion.

Like busted flush what did you mean by it's "poor in parts"

Bobon

Cool man, layin your love on the line. Fair play, very nice

trilo

trilo wrote:

Ahh bless, you must really love your missus.

I do, I really do:)

It wasn't a poem I spent much time writing, just wrote what was in my heart and mind, and that was the end result